some sort of writting stuff ...again...

ok, i know i might bother with my schoolish (new word in a dictionary) witting, but this is something i been working last few days (more with thinking and some time with actually witting). so here it is a bit updated version of story i wrote so far. :)

I'll start with a complete blank page. Lets draw a school or library building drawn with plain black pencil. Let's get close to it's door. On that cartoon animation (like red bull adds on tv) doors opens. Now picture becomes realistic. Girl is going out of the door.
She wears a white hat which tight covers her forehead and ears. Her hair is straight, bit longer then her shoulders, no sign of hair diet. Cold blue or green look in her eyes. Plain bright skin, strawberry colour lips. Girl wears long dark coat which ends just above her knees. Carrying bright grey shoulder bag and holding it by one her hand on which is black leather glove. She wears dark blue jeans and black walking shoes.
See her walking from above, when she turns round the corner.
She walks in to a small squire where lots of young people. Her cold blue eyes curiously turns to her left hand side.
There a young couple playing on snow, throwing snow balls to each other, laughing out loud. Another couple lying on snow and kissing.
Our girls eyes looks down a bit shamed. Then she take a look to her right hand side.
She sees parents taking their children on a sledge. Further in a park between frozen trees more kids playing and laughing. She sees happy parents watching their children playing.
Girl wipes her nose when reach a crossroad. She was about to cross the street when suddenly a snow cleaning machine goes through, and cold blue eyed girl falls back down. Lots of people in a hurry to help her. They help her to stand up, cleans snow from her coat and wonder if she's alright. She just smiles her cold smile, uncovering white tooth and showing cheek grooves, and walks across the road.
View from the top. Watching her going from behind her. Fly over her and se her from the front. She's walking with a vivid smile. Eyes steering one direction - obviously day dreaming.
Going down from the tops when reaching frozen river and a skate ground made on it. Hundred of people are skating here. Smile and happiness covers almost all of they faces. Going through those plastic happy people and suddenly stop. See the same girl with cold expression on her face. She just begun to skate the ice. She does a few spins and the squeezes an warm smile on her cold face.
When she smiles you can see a sinks on her cheeks, faded lips, but she smiles by not showing her tooth. Eyes following the way.