my new writing

maybe this is not the best story, but that's what i was able to write after i hear some songs and saw some accidents. :)
maybe i'm not best writer, especially in english. considering all that i would be appreciate having any feadback even if it's not a good one.
so here it is:

Cruel - hurts

Have you ever had this paranoid feeling that some people you cross in the street are cruel, and some of them are so sad? I found this story in a street.
What would you think if you cross with young redhead woman, with plain skin, wearing a knee high strap shoulder dress? But if you look deeper you might see tears on her eyes and a bruise underneath her eye… And what do you think now? I thought like this: she was beaten and left by her bad boyfriend.
All her early life she was a good student at school. But when she reach her early 17's she fell in love with a boy from her school, who was maybe not the best student, and maybe, not even a good sportsman. But she like that he was a rebel and all that she wasn't. they (she more) were so naïve. After boy graduated, he begun to work at car service and promise to her and her parents that he will be the head of the family and earn money to the young girl. They lived a happy life - girl was at school, every day they meet after his work. They spent hours by holding each other hands, they were walking under the moonlight like some couples do. Girl graduated school, and was happy by feeling her lover arms around her. She had a proposition to study her favorite subject - medicine at one of the best university of the country and she did that.
In the autumn both boy and girl got to live together in a small flat they rent somewhere in a corner of the town. Girl begins her studies. Boy keeps his hands on cars. They got together everyday at home. After three months living together the girl more and more was involved in studies. Guy was working hard to pay rent ant taxes. They begin to fight about small things. Maybe small thing wasn't that small when boy started to drink with his friends from work?... drinking habit has gone stronger as he got fired for drinking at wok. The girl had to find a job to pay a rent.
Question: Why she didn't left him? Because she had been taught never to leave a person you love - alone. Help him as more as you can.
But she had to suspend her studies as guy hadn't quit drinking and he requires money to buy some alcohol. She started to work in store as cashier. After two months she had a proposition to work as a junior manager. When she took that job, guy got joy, because she'll get more money, what means more money he could spend on drinks.
Now the girl gives an ultimatum for him - quit drinking and get a job. He promised to do that. He started to look for a job. Girl was working hard. Everyday went home helping ton her man to search a job.
Stop on this and question again: What about his drinking? She was so naïve to believe he will quit and blind to see that guy just pretend he quit and is looking for a job. She was so blind and not noticing he was drinking and hiding. Steeling money from her wallet.
A year gone through. Girl got a proposition to become a senior manager, but she'll need to gone through a company training in other town. She went out to a stock room when her drunk boyfriend came to her work. He began to shout on her. He blames her that she is unfaithful, hat she is always at work… He turn on quiet a scandal in store full of customers an her boss watching. Boss tell her to get him out otherwise she'll be fired. Boyfriend got mad on to her boss and hit him. Of course she was told that she is fired. And hat drunk man could think more then fight? So he hit the girl's face. Our young girl falls down.
And just then, at that moment she was falling she realizes all those things about her lover. She was about to promise herself to brake him, but her head fall down and hit the ground.
When she woke up she saw her boyfriend taking out by security, angry boss's face telling her to get out and a bunch of people steering.
She got up the ground and run out. She runs to a park wanting to be alone. That's when se passes me and sits on park bench crying.
And at the end I got this question in my mind:
Does such story is really able to happen?